I was purely shocked by the
feedback I received from my second pitch – as I was my first. Everyone was very
open to my product idea, my use of a whiteboard, and the minor changes made. I
was very pleased and surprised to see such sweet feedback from classmates. It
honestly made me so happy. I felt I could be stronger when it came to overall
presentation and including more details about the product. So this time I
decided to shorten my explanation of the product but also include details of
where this product can be found. I tried not to talk too fast but I believe I
may have done so in trying to get all the information in there. I did use a
visual again with the whiteboard since it seemed like a hit. It was right under
one minute but I wanted to throw myself into “the elevator” like the last time
so it really was true to the assignment. And yes, I colored my hair
since the last pitch!
Hi Isabella,
ReplyDeleteI have been following your pitches and this is certainly impressive work. I like how you got closer to the whiteboard, that certainly cuts down on time spent pointing. Overall very professional and I believe you are ready to impress the proper parties with your proposals!
Hi Isabella. You are a natural in giving these elevator pitches! You capture my attention and leave me wanting to know alot more about your fantastic product. Dont worry about talking a little fast, I take that as someone who is passionate and excited about their product and it makes me excited about it as well. Remarkable delivery! Good luck in the future.
ReplyDeleteHey Isabella,
ReplyDeleteAs usual, great work! I love your product idea, and I would like to see it put into the market. Well done!
- Ryan
Hey Isabella,
ReplyDeleteYour third pitch was great! The visual demonstration was a plus and it offered greater insight as to what your product does. I suggest really focusing on the "mom market" because I feel like you will have great success in it. The only critique I have is to maintain eye-contact with the audience more. Other than that, great job!
Isabella, I think your last pitch is great and you keeping the whiteboard was a great choice, as stated earlier standing closer to the white board was good idea because you saved time while not having to point at it. Also, just having the white board makes the talk more efficient and thorough, keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Isabella,
ReplyDeleteI'm not in your group but I just voted for you. Great job on your pitch and using a visual demonstration.