I was purely shocked by the feedback I received from my
first elevator pitch. Everyone was very open to my product idea, “seeing” me
for the first time, the way I outlined my pitch, and my use of a whiteboard. I
was very pleased and surprised to see such sweet feedback from classmates. It
honestly made me so happy. I felt I could be stronger when it came to overall
presentation and including more details about the product. So this time I
decided not include reasoning of why I came up with the product but included
price range whereas in the last pitch I did not include pricing at all. I did
use a visual again with the whiteboard since it seemed like a hit. It was right
under one minute but I wanted to throw myself into “the elevator” like the last
time so it really was true to the assignment.
Hi Isabella. Great job on your elevator pitch again. The small adjustments to your pitch were perfect. I love the energy and passion you have for your product, it is quite obvious in your pitches and makes me want to know more about your product and more about you. Excellent job and keep up the great work.
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DeleteThank you so much! I saw your second pitch and you did an amazing job. You have much improved and only continue to get stronger. I have told my dad (we love fishing and boating) about your idea and he wants you to invest in it!
Hi Isabella,
ReplyDeleteI reviewed your first elevator pitch and was quite impressed with your use of a whiteboard than and even more now. In one minute you were able to sketch ideas and remembered to make eye contact with the viewer on a consistent basis. You did a great job of presenting your concept in a difficult medium. Looking forward to number 3!
Hi Isabella - Great job on your pitch! It seems like you really took the time to develop your pitch and make it even better than last times. I still love the whiteboard! Your pitch was great and your product sounds awesome. Great job and great product!
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